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Only a fool would take anything posted here as fact.
Only a fool would take anything posted here as fact.
Story time!
>>705235099
Kool
go on
keep going fam
>>705236165
Post faster
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>>705236675
Somebody throw a fucking pie
>>705236776
Faster, or link to the full comic.
>>705237146
This
>>705237122
Checking dubs
>>705237146
I guess I should give a fair warning. I know this comic gets posted here often. This time it's by the author. Fair warning it's UNFINISHED. So enjoy what you're getting with the knowledge that it comes with no conclusion.
I'm just posting it as a final goobye. Officially started working on another work and started looking for an artist.
>>705237247
Faster you fucking nigger
Everything about this is fucking terrible.
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>>705237463
Written four years ago by a college kid. Cringe is to be expected.
>>705237450
You're not the author
>>705237146
this pls
>>705237566
why did you made the main character so ugly ? wtf
i was expecting some action with that green eyes dude, tho
>>705236675
why is this 21.jpg and not 20?
what are you doing h
>>705237780
Main character is fictional version Bobby Kotick, who's no Brad Pitt.
Woops forgot 31
>>705237831
it's because of candlej-
>check name
>>705236675
>no man's sky
>>705237903
shut the fuck up and just post the pictures faggot
noone cares about what you are typing
>>705238110
>implying I don't care
>>705238093
kek
>>705237903
you should post this on /v/ then
This comic started good but ruined by the author's cringery definition of afterlife.
I know what Will be in the end:
>kid overlogical the portal guy
>he gets Home to play more boring jumping video game
>>705238204
the Game
This is an unfinished comic called the Kotick Chronicles, here is a full link to everything that is out: http://imgur.com/a/bzsTs
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>>705238307
>http://imgur.com/a/bzsTs
virus
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>>705238204
>thinking cringey is an appropriate way to describe something you don't like.
Maybe pretentious is a better word?
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>>705238376
neither is appropriate here
The art is awful.
The writing awful
The direction doesn't exist.
It's choppy, no motive word salad.
Don't ever quit your day job OP...you will go broke.
>>705238517
why are you even in this thread, faggot?
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>>705238517
Thanks Ebert! Will keep in mind.
>>705238272
Fuck you
kinda curious why the image numbers and page numbers are jumpy, but i'm still following and interested so far.
>>705238684
i like this and i want to see more.
>>705238593
I thought it wouod develope but it seems like it's going to be 600 pages of teenage mental illness. I'm out.
>>705238691
Maybe the author made several versions for each page, with tiny details varying, and eventually just picked one, while having numbered them all in a row before this procedure of final selection.
>>705238758
okay, have a good day/evening
>>705238794
Correct.
>>705235099
fucking autismo supreme
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>>705238994
he looks so jewish
>>>705238994
How kind of those people to clean his face off before dumping him in the trash
>>705239072
the very first panel tells you this is bobby kotick, who is indeed a real person. pic related. he's the ceo of activision blizzard, which might kind of inform where the story is headed.
>>705235758
that is one ugly fucking character, I hope those guys fucking ruin his life
>>705238758
Same, started off okay but it's just fucking laboured. I got bored about page 30.
I'm done with this too.
>>705239257
*click*
>>705239630
there is a typo (twice "with") in the 3rd image
And that's all folks.
>>705239692
also a typo here at "plateau"
>>705239930
There's nothing more to deliver. That was as far as I got.
Good ol' Kotick Chronicles. I've them saved in my HD too, too sad Brokecritic went missing and never finished it. Guess he was scared of Blizzard going for his ass.
>>705239875
>nigger faggot
Hey...that's pretty goood
God damnit OP I was reading that
I need the next fucking page
>>705240003
Mostly stopped the comic since I had to draw it as well as write it. I'm neither like drawing nor am good at it.
Working on another series now and looking to hire an artist.
So was he building...
OUTER HEAVEN?
That was such a good read...I NEED MORE
>>705239997
aaaw
>>705240153
what the series about?
>>705239930
Sadly no more I wanted to see what he was gonna build
>>705240153
Oh, you Olek? Would be nice to have somewhere yo find your most recent stuff when you deliver it, I really liked it. Also, look for artist at /co/, sometimes they offer themselfs for projects.
>>705240153
Speaking of which, if you're an artist interested in contract work for another series with a similar tone, hit me up. Here's a sample first page I did.
MayTheyFindPeace @ gmail com
Also feel free to spam hate mail.
>>705235099
were these made with that comic book creator thing? what was it calleD?
>>705240484
Also another sample page. Similar dark tone as Kotick chronicles.
>>705240484
Im guessing its gonna be sorta like LiSA. Judging by the page
>>705240484
Reminds me the "A Strange Laugh" series, another work by Brokecritic. Good work.
>>705240663
Actually, fuck it, let me just post the sample pages I've done.
>>705240753
Oh man, I forgot about A Strange Laugh. Yup. Same style. It's the easiest way to draw for me since I can't draw.
Vector art.
>>705240322
So it ends there or the guy creating this is not done yet?
>>705241048
Didn't get to coloring this page.
>>705241002
It's aprox a 5 year old incomplete series. As seen in the thread, author is looking for an artist into a new project, likely letting this on hold.
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>>705241223
Correct. So if you're an artist or now someone who is have them shoot me an e-mail at [email protected]
Willing to pay for art on my shoe string budget.
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>>705241612
And this is as far as I've gotten.
This is the series I'm looking for an artist for btw.
Wrong page numeration or you forgot page7x?
>>705241791
Sorting is right. I just fucked up naming.
nigga this shit is autistic
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>>705241789
I realize is an ongoing series, yet to develop, but still I find it kinda confusing, considering it's the start of it. It doesn't show at all anything about who are the characters, their motivations or the relations between them. You likely want people to emphatize with them as soon as possible, and there is little chance to do it while they're so cryptic. You did it right enough with Kotick (A kid being bullied, then the random stuff happens but we get to know how and what is going on). I'd rethink it a bit.
>>705239692
So you don't have Blake background chapter around? I remember there used to be like 72 pages.
>>705242798
It's a 30 page first chapter. Everything goes ape shit in about 2 pages. Believe me I'm very aware that an audience needs to have an investment in character(s) to give a shit.
If you're into anime, I start this series a bit like Baccano.
Quickbump.
Every post is a repost of a repost.
You're shit, but I'm not articulate enough to specify how.
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>>705245575
We never forget.
This fucking sucks. I hope you die
>>705246577
Holy crap you guys saved the pages that were lost even to me.
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>>705247070
And now this is it.
>>705246713
Greetings from the anon archive. Once something it's on the internet, it's never gone.
>>705247358
I remember how that was going to go. He was going to meet the gateway as well. However instead of a spider, there would be a Lion in the eye.
Also since his brains were blown he could not return to his former body. He would have to return to the very first point of his origin, his birth.
Meaning that he would get another chance at life. Except he would have different experiences, leading to him being the Peter M we met instead of the 'badass' in the comic.
