How can I make my video game better?
I've been working on this thing for three years and here is the first demo video. Let me know what I can do to make this the most awesome thing ever.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zmPV33x1jlg
delete it
>>675568517
I bet you're gay
Try not using fagity 3D
how about the walking on walls?
>>675568517
The maps are too gaudy and there is an overabundance of simple primitive shapes that would be cool if it had more consistency, but ends up being an obvious example of your laziness as a developer.
Some aspects are cartoony, and low res. Some are not. For example your character is portrayed as having a real human body underneath the armor, yet your in this surrealistic realm full of virtual imagery and odd shapes.
You need to pick a consistent theme... either go fully for the low res low poly look, or make it all believably real looking. Or if you do want to incorporate both sides, do it in a way that looks intentional, and purposeful.
The particle effects are laughable. So are some of the animations.
>>675568517
Texture mapping needs work, and work on those fucking cross hairs. Interesting premise, but it needs work still.
>>675568517
Delete your project and kill yourself, that game looks like trash.
Remove Samus so nintendo doesn't sue your ass, add actual textures
That's the most useful thing I've heard in a while. What animations specifically should be changed, I know the jump is probably the worst.
We said for you to fucking kill yourself. This whole concept of the game looks like unrefined dog shit and you'll struggle to sell copies because of that.
>>675570632
I'm not gonna do your project for you. The animations don't have fluid transitions and believable motion. Watch pro animations and compare with your game... if you can't tell any difference you simply don't have an eye for animation and you need to find someone that does and get him/her involved.
I gave ya your first YouTube comment
KILL YOURSELF, SCRAP THIS TURD GAME
If this is the result of three years' work, then there's probably only two things you can do to make this a good game: hire a team who is good at development or get good at development. This demo is the kind of thing someone makes in a month, not a full-fledged game.
I'd play it, but I'd wonder why you went with Unity instead of Cry engine or Unreal engine.
All honesty, if you're going to make it low res, like some of the shapes are, find a better color scheme for the maps and make everything low res, but if you want it to be high res, find a better color scheme and make everything high res.
>>675568517
OP what are you coding this in?
>>675568517
I'd play this, looks good. The lack of color and HUD could use some work though, and some of the characters' animations aren't quite right. which is one of the reasons why I dislike unity
Looks like one of those games that were made in 7 days, unpolished for so years of work... Will the textures, quality animations and complete recoding of the game be a DLC? I would say quit game development and focus on something else, you just don't have the skill required to finish.
>>675568517
You are fucked. Expect a meme company to rip off your idea.
>screenshot this
Cool idea on the 4D walking/movement
>>675568517
Looks awesome! Don't mind the GUI haters, it all changes 100x before release anyway.
Run n gun with wall running is the shit! Prince of Persia + Unreal?
I'm in!
>>675572260
You'd probably make a better game than this lazy inept OP developer.
>>675568517
>>675571857
Oh, and also I feel you simply need to add a more robust pool of animations to call upon. I don't know your code, but it feels like most animations are being chosen with too few arguments being passed in, thus you're getting a lot of recycled stuff.
For example, strafe running breaks forward running animation from shoulders up for sure. I'd go ahead and make a separate animation just for strafe running.
But hey man, this is better than any shit I could crank out. Well done, if that means anything from an anon.
>>675571683
Unreal has better graphics but as far as developing game mechanics is an uphill battle. Unity is overall a lot better
>>675568517
what engine is this in.
>>675572864
The engine is FUCKYOU.exe, same to the dumbass developer.
>>675572560
Thanks man, getting the animations to work together is by far the hardest part of making this shit work. Maybe I'll download some kind of plugin to help with this shit
>>675572864
Unity 3D
>>675572969
im trying to help if this is in unity i can help with textures and environment. i do work for VR Chat and i have lots of experience in unity
>now please sit the fuck down and shut up cunt
>>675573136
Hell yeah anon, I could use some help making new levels. Hit me up via youtube
>>675573136
Eat shit and swallow the OP's sperm, cum chugger.
>>675570069
Agreed with above and to add. A lot of the levels are too big smaller levels won't look as empty and barren.
A clean aesthetic is doable but vary things up so it isn't boring (see mirrors edge).
Shares his work on 4chan, I'm calling bullshit. This is fake.. I've found the images somewhere else online.
>>675573370
wow someone is salty
>>675573266
yeah i posted a comment. try to get to me soon!
>>675568517
You should call it
CRINGE: The Legend of the Faggot OP
>>675573546
prove it
Collision would be nice.
>>675573680
and if you are really serious about this i am too because i know unity well
>>675576042
yeah dude, I PM'd you on youtube
I did enjoy the idea of a donut level. Its long rang and close quarters just depending on which way you run.
>>675576189
awsome!!! i got it.
>>675572260
I'm sorry, but I have to ask. Where is the 4D in all of this?
>>675573084
spend some money or give some equity to an experienced ani. i'm going to guess you can do it, but it's certainly not the bet use of your time.
also, agree with the anon that said you need to make the levels smaller/more dense. go play some Quake 3 or unreal tourney, and really try and get a feel for how big those levels are.
>hint - they aren't, they're small as shit, just convoluted and constructed to give illusion of size
Video description:
>it's a first person shooter.
>first person shooter
>first person
IGN would like it.
>>675568517
can i play
kik me: darkxx01
>>675577265
There may be a demo in a couple of months
>>675577611
Fuck off pedo
>>675573084
Animations and also the map like other people stated. I would also say you need to revisit the UI.
It may take a considerable amount of tweaks to get the UI acceptable, but that's just how UI development is.
I would almost never show decimal points in any UI element either.
Once you get a better layout of the UI, I would invest time into getting a font style that meshes well with the graphics in your game. Then I would work on some UI graphics to make it feel a bit more immersive.
As for the gameplay, I honestly don't know since I haven't played, but it seems like your networking is pretty solid (for your current audience).
Nice job so far, just need to iron out a few things and polish everything off.
get an artist first of all.
and wtf is Samus doing in your game
This looks kind of fun. Here are some ideas.
> Add HUD
> Make screen darker and grittier
> Move camera to show view over player's shoulder
> Health bars on enemies
> Shooting enemies shows damage numbers
> Some sort of superpower/ability for main character
> Unique bosses
> Enemy abilities/classes
> PVP with Photon networking
>>675579812
Oh also, your "ramps" that allow you to run on walls might want to be more abundant than they are just for playability.
I'd play around with the ratio between just a wall and floor touching and a ramp.
I also agree that the map sizes could be smaller. Potentially less open so you get more interesting encounters around corners, jumping up over fences/boxes.
If you allow jumping in the game then create more in-game mechanics associated with it.
I love jumping, but what I might hate more than not being able to jump is the ability to jump and nothing to jump up/on/over.
Don't just add functionality willy-nilly (not saying you have been, just a design concept). If you add functionality think about all its uses and how important you want it to be.
>>675580846
>>675580281
Thanks a lot. I'm really looking forward to changing some things and making a second demo. Posting this on 4chan was a good idea, other websites just tell you its awesome, you guys actually point out the flaws that need changing
>>675580846
me
>>675581408
I think this is the first time I've ever heard someone say that lol.
