Posting a porn comic I wrote and drew where a young mutant takes control of many of the Marvel superheroines. Let me know what you think! All feedback is welcome and I have multiple chapters to post.
First Up: Emma Frost
>>702534145
>>702534440
Anyone reading?
>>702534501
im lurkin
>>702534475
Yes!
keep going
>>702534540
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>>702534557
Ok cool. again any and all feedback welcome
plot and art style seem legit so far
>>702535434
And so Emma Frost, the proud White Queen, becomes a shameless slut for a boy she barely knows.
Next: Psylocke.
Thoughts?
i like this alot
bump
>>702535507
Chapter 2: Psylocke
>>702535507
Bravo, post some more. 8/10
Keep it cumming
>>702535507
dumping so much at once may actually kill the thread, but keep it up
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>>702535507
you are a master.
>>702535663
How would it kill the thread?
>>702535635
why the deduction of 2?
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>>702535731
it was on page 9 when someone bumped it. another min and it have fallen off the board.
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>>702535973
That's not how it works newfag
>>702535973
does it fall down the rankings because i'm doing all the posting?
this split thing you got going on is awesome
>>702536073
>>702536073
Don't listen to that newfag.
Whatever the IP is of the OP, that IP can't bump the thread.
Someone else with a different IP from the OP has to comment to bump it.
>>702536132
Thank you. Didn't want to let the reader forget that it was Emma's body he was using.
>>702536157
Got it. That's what I figured. That's why I try to spur discussion on these long threads. But the only way to keep the thread alive is by posting as much as possible.
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>>702536275
When the OP is the only person posting the thread won't bump at all. Only until other people start posting can the OP bump their own thread in x amount of time.
>>702536157
But, that is what >>702535973 means, kid.
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>>702534389
so he takes control of her but needs roofies to do it? wtf?
nice stuff OP
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>>702536316
As OP, I can only bump this thread by posting more content, right
Bump nigga
>>702536405
Wouldn't want to risk giving her the opportunity to fight back -- she's an X-man and likely a skilled hand-to-hand combatant.
You should put psylocke in her uniform in more of the frames.
Maybe even a ripped version, going full nude immediately is pointless.
>>702536515
Psylocke sobs deeply as the shame and pleasure of the dream wash over her. Worst of all is the knowledge that it will happen again, whenever she sleeps. How long can she resist?
Next: Phoenix
Keep those comments coming!
Is there like a download for all these in one file?
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>>702536594
should have a girl with massive boobs and big ass in this series...
>>702536594
Go on plox, like it
>>702536621
at benchleyfan01.imgur.com I believe you can download full albums
>>702534145
Hey anon, if you really made these, they are superb! Keep up the great work!
>>702536778
Anyone have favorite pages, panels, or lines of dialogue? Any major likes or dislikes appreciated.
>>702536872
It's too plain
>>702537006
plain?
>>702537042
>Update
>>702537171
I don't understand the "plain" criticism. It's a story about a teenage boy raping superheroines and turning them into cum-hungry slut slaves. What's plain about that?
>>702537244
It's just blowjobs and sex.
It's just self-inserting into the boy.
No colors except for the cover.
How about anal, anal gape, large object insertions, gang rape, nigger gang rape, bestiality rape.
It's literally too plain for /b/ except for newfags on /b/.
>>702537422
I mean he did fuck Psylocke in the ass while he was raping her mind. Also it's multiple chapters so give me time to build. But your stance is duly noted.
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>>702537422
He just had this woman's husband seduced and murdered, then fed the images into her mind while he was raping her. Too plain?
good thread, good content
>>702537846
>He just had this woman's husband seduced and murdered
Oh that was in the text?
Can we see that happening?
>>702538207
anyone still reading?
>>702538322
yes
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>>702536778
I like your work, it's got a good story and the art is fairly good. This panel, however, needs work. The poses and body language scream uncanny valley, especially Emma Frost. My biggest criticism is honestly just keep working on your anatomy.
>>702538756
That's very good advice. Thank you.
bump
bump
>>702539264
Keep those comments and feedback coming! Any crit, of the writing, the themes, the art, is fair game. love it? tell me why. hate it? tell me why
>>702539405
Even the mighty Phoenix surrenders to him, his lusts lacing in with her own dark thirst for power and bonding her to him for all time, a dark mirror, a perfect mate. A consort, a whore.
Thoughts?
Not too fond of this type of submission.
Instead of some 16 year old edgelord kid I think it would be hotter if it were one of the villains and make them have a monstrous appearance.
The 16 year old kid looking twink is just ruining it for me.
>>702539574
needs more girl on girl
good work either way
>>702539824
girl on girl is for pussies
I love the artwork! It’s not my ideal, but it’s very good! (My ideal is bigger tits, bigger female butts, Asian chicks, younger boy, all consensual, all hetero, all color.)
>>702539970
why do you say that?
>>702539264
Work on faces, all those women have sameface. Also body type. Some women have bigger hips and smaller tits, thick thighs, etc.
>>702540004
You might enjoy some of my other work then.
>>702540184
Unrelated story.
>>702539574
Your psyloche comic was very rough work, choppy lines and such. I much prefer the Emma and Jean comics for artistic style.
Generally as well, your comics should have more real sense of risk in the story lines; there was never an 'oh shit' moment in the readers head, just an obviously untouchable protagonist.
>>702540252
Rey is a disgusting bat face rat girl.
>>702540476
Here's another fun one.
>>702540575
Keep those comments coming!
>>702540670
i've selected so many storefronts today
>>702540427
It’s very good. When the boobs are flattened like that — I like to see the nipple. It’s a little thing that helps.
>>702540768
One thing I don’t understand about graphic artists: why is everything vertical? Most people use horizontal screens, like me. So why not make the .jpg conform to horizontal dimensions, instead? That way, when you “full screen” the .jpg, everything isn’t tiny.
I like your stuff. Have anything with realistic sized dicks?
