Posting a porn comic I wrote and drew where a young mutant takes control of many of the Marvel superheroines. Let me know what you think! All feedback is welcome and I have multiple chapters to post.
First Up: Emma Frost
Ok cool. again any and all feedback welcome
And so Emma Frost, the proud White Queen, becomes a shameless slut for a boy she barely knows.
does it fall down the rankings because i'm doing all the posting?
Thank you. Didn't want to let the reader forget that it was Emma's body he was using.
Got it. That's what I figured. That's why I try to spur discussion on these long threads. But the only way to keep the thread alive is by posting as much as possible.
When the OP is the only person posting the thread won't bump at all. Only until other people start posting can the OP bump their own thread in x amount of time.
But, that is what >>702535973 means, kid.
As OP, I can only bump this thread by posting more content, right
Wouldn't want to risk giving her the opportunity to fight back -- she's an X-man and likely a skilled hand-to-hand combatant.
Psylocke sobs deeply as the shame and pleasure of the dream wash over her. Worst of all is the knowledge that it will happen again, whenever she sleeps. How long can she resist?
Keep those comments coming!
should have a girl with massive boobs and big ass in this series...
at benchleyfan01.imgur.com I believe you can download full albums
Anyone have favorite pages, panels, or lines of dialogue? Any major likes or dislikes appreciated.
I don't understand the "plain" criticism. It's a story about a teenage boy raping superheroines and turning them into cum-hungry slut slaves. What's plain about that?
It's just blowjobs and sex.
It's just self-inserting into the boy.
No colors except for the cover.
How about anal, anal gape, large object insertions, gang rape, nigger gang rape, bestiality rape.
It's literally too plain for /b/ except for newfags on /b/.
I mean he did fuck Psylocke in the ass while he was raping her mind. Also it's multiple chapters so give me time to build. But your stance is duly noted.
He just had this woman's husband seduced and murdered, then fed the images into her mind while he was raping her. Too plain?
it's all here
I like your work, it's got a good story and the art is fairly good. This panel, however, needs work. The poses and body language scream uncanny valley, especially Emma Frost. My biggest criticism is honestly just keep working on your anatomy.
Keep those comments and feedback coming! Any crit, of the writing, the themes, the art, is fair game. love it? tell me why. hate it? tell me why
Even the mighty Phoenix surrenders to him, his lusts lacing in with her own dark thirst for power and bonding her to him for all time, a dark mirror, a perfect mate. A consort, a whore.
Instead of some 16 year old edgelord kid I think it would be hotter if it were one of the villains and make them have a monstrous appearance.
The 16 year old kid looking twink is just ruining it for me.
You might enjoy some of my other work then.
Your psyloche comic was very rough work, choppy lines and such. I much prefer the Emma and Jean comics for artistic style.
Generally as well, your comics should have more real sense of risk in the story lines; there was never an 'oh shit' moment in the readers head, just an obviously untouchable protagonist.
One thing I don’t understand about graphic artists: why is everything vertical? Most people use horizontal screens, like me. So why not make the .jpg conform to horizontal dimensions, instead? That way, when you “full screen” the .jpg, everything isn’t tiny.